Don't leave me Naruto-Kun

firstly i really like the picture and i'm glad you decided to colour it
the only main thing i'd say to change is the light source is to bright
and distracts the eye drawing away from the main focus point
i recommend making that less noticeable that way the eyes focus
on her straight away maybe just cutting part of the top off
only two other things i'd say first you should add some shading
inside of the sleeve of the arm reaching out
the second is more of an optional and that's adding
more shade to the leg on the right since it's behind
and that can add a nice effect sometimes
oh and maybe a little bit of shadow on the right side of
the neck that's all the things i think for improvement

and the things i like now then
when i scrolled down slightly so the light source was cut off
the my eyes focused straight to her face and with that the
emotion of the picture which is very good

i really liked your colour choices and how gentle the shading
looks which compliment the feeling of the picture

and i like your line work to it has motion but also rigged enough
to show control

overall i really like the picture
while thinking to really help the image you
should cut the canvas about 1cm above her head
so she becomes the thing the eyes naturally draw to

but keep up the excellent work
and i can't wait to see what you do next