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Naruko fanart by Garry-Ho Naruko fanart by Garry-Ho
Naruko fanart by me :icongarry-ho:
hope you like it :)

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:iconkyleatwork:
okay then overall i really like the picture
the colours work very well together
contrasting but subtle enough not to work against each other
i really like the hair it isn't defying the laws of gravity to the
noticeable extent

there are a few things i noticed that firstly the leg on the right
at the knee i think the shadow is to perfectly round and that
makes it stand out a little as just two pieces to fix it either
a little more shade on the sides or less to look more like the
shadow on the left leg

next would be the white coat at the bottom i think the right side
is a little to thin think dropping the line to just bellow the bend
in the right leg would work

and a few minor nitpicks would be the shadow between her breasts
should be slightly higher and the line for the sea looks to perfect
going next to the line without a ruler should work to keep it still
a line just not a perfect straight line

overall though i think most of what i said were nitpicks
and the picture looks awesome

also i really like how you drew the clouds
you have a good balance with how many there are
and they don't distract from the image

keep up the good work
and i can't wait to see what you do next
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:iconnano4k:
Nano4K Featured By Owner May 19, 2017
those twintails x3
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner May 19, 2017   Digital Artist
xD hello Nano! how are you?
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:iconnano4k:
Nano4K Featured By Owner May 19, 2017
i am good and you? long time no see ^^
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner May 20, 2017   Digital Artist
I'm fine. yeah long time no see :D
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:iconnano4k:
Nano4K Featured By Owner May 21, 2017
great you are still here ^^
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner May 23, 2017   Digital Artist
Yeah.haha :D
I love drawing , and I need money. So, here I am :p
But I am too lazy, maybe I need drawing more so people can see me :dummy:
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:iconnano4k:
Nano4K Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
yes. draw more! more hair! x3

what do you think about him?  Comm: nano Cheval by Atz-zukin
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner May 25, 2017   Digital Artist
xD
whoaaa.. cool! Monster Hunter Stories Ride on!
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:iconkyleatwork:
kyleATwork Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Hobbyist
i like the picture just got back on deviant art 
after a week break i'll write the critique later 
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016   Digital Artist
thank you Kyle :hug:
okay, hehe.
I will draw more~
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:iconkyleatwork:
kyleATwork Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist
your welcome 
can't wait to see them 

have to admit though writing a critique 
always makes me feel like i'm being mean 
if i point something out that's wrong 
even if i like the picture and there is more 
things done right 
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016   Digital Artist
Nahh... Don't feel like that.
I have been someone that hurting because of it, but not anymore.
Now I consider the criticism is constructive.
Made me become better at drawing, and I may not be able to see all my shortcomings.
and I do like your criticism :hug:
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:iconkyleatwork:
kyleATwork Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist
true it can help to improve work
and your right criticism and constructive criticism
are different things also thank you very much 
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016   Digital Artist
yeppp. I am thanking you, not otherwise xD
sorry I just read your critique, I'll write a reply tomorrow.
I have a problem with my PC yesterday, and this day with my internet connection xO
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:iconkyleatwork:
kyleATwork Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist
sounds like a huge pain hope your PC behaves now 
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2016   Digital Artist
yeah.. sorry it's been a very long time.
I have a problem with real life haha.. and there's a serious political issues in my country that can affect my country.
if it happens, it will be a massacre. and I'm the minorities here xO
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:iconsoulrath-kivurahk:
Soulrath-kivurahk Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Naruko Uzumki!!
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016   Digital Artist
Yeahh! Who doesn't? XD
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:iconsoulrath-kivurahk:
Soulrath-kivurahk Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Naruko vs Sasuke!!
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016   Digital Artist
okay! will draw Naruko x Sasuke next! :D :dummy:
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:iconsoulrath-kivurahk:
Soulrath-kivurahk Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol awesome
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016   Digital Artist
done! just a sketch tho~
I will coloring them yesterday if I can haha
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:iconsoulrath-kivurahk:
Soulrath-kivurahk Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok
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:iconnunie15:
nunie15 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016
Great job
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016   Digital Artist
Thanks! :dummy:
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:iconnunie15:
nunie15 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016
Your welcome
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:iconrizihike:
rizihike Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Nice. Keep it up
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016   Digital Artist
Thank you Rizihike! I will do my best :D
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:icongameponysly:
GamePonySly Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Student
Sweet NarukoHeart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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:icongarry-ho:
Garry-Ho Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016   Digital Artist
Thanks! :dummy:
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:icongameponysly:
GamePonySly Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2016  Student
You're welcome! :love:
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